tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post2859208566632056796..comments2023-11-05T03:28:26.523-08:00Comments on The Daily Warrior: One Deep Breath - E=mc2 "Energy"Tammy Brierlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-39555530639176979532007-04-19T09:25:00.000-07:002007-04-19T09:25:00.000-07:00Love it! Great work, Tammy. xoLove it! Great work, Tammy. xoparis parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-43332315129074922152007-04-18T14:23:00.000-07:002007-04-18T14:23:00.000-07:00Tammy,I think this illustrates both the beauty and...Tammy,<BR/>I think this illustrates both the beauty and intent of a haibun perfectly. The ambivilance of leaving a "home" and moving to a new "house" is clearly outlined here. <BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-49306718933509719372007-04-18T13:06:00.000-07:002007-04-18T13:06:00.000-07:00your talent never ceases to amaze me!! wonderfull...your talent never ceases to amaze me!! wonderfully done. sending you warm thoughts and lots of luck with all things moving :)daisieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06471659782256693603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-58526552922115681462007-04-18T12:16:00.000-07:002007-04-18T12:16:00.000-07:00Lovely springtimey bright photo :)And I love the s...Lovely springtimey bright photo :)<BR/><BR/>And I love the shortness of the haibun-much said in few words.<BR/><BR/>Good luck with the move!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-81716416723987797682007-04-18T11:01:00.000-07:002007-04-18T11:01:00.000-07:00It is strange to look around and see all those fam...It is strange to look around and see all those familiar pictures gone, your home is now a show case but soon you'll be in your dream house with all your comfortable belongings and you'll be happy.<BR/><BR/>Hugs,<BR/>JoleneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-65999622964048761602007-04-18T07:27:00.000-07:002007-04-18T07:27:00.000-07:00Hey! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!...Hey! Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment! lol!<BR/><BR/>Your blog is cool! Im sitting here listening to your tune! I love this song... what a way to start the day! <BR/><BR/>Your profile pic is neat! Beautiful flower..<BR/><BR/>Your moving.. I remember doing this too. You have explained it perfectly!Angela Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03835467401421359066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-32089847837087267372007-04-18T06:48:00.000-07:002007-04-18T06:48:00.000-07:00You make it real for your reader. High praise.You make it real for your reader. High praise.meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00752325087812245351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-80220748765324760382007-04-18T04:27:00.000-07:002007-04-18T04:27:00.000-07:00Tammy, I think you certainly nailed the traumatisi...Tammy, I think you certainly nailed the traumatising emotions evoked by moving house even as a positive change. Good luck with your move :-)claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-28723519516262646192007-04-17T22:02:00.000-07:002007-04-17T22:02:00.000-07:00Hiya,Good luck with the home sale!Thx for teaching...Hiya,<BR/>Good luck with the home sale!<BR/>Thx for teaching me about a new form of poetry. I've not heard of this. I think you nailed it fine! Tammy,<BR/>I adore the "heart in a box" one. It's how I feel now.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-56066596412197802092007-04-17T21:28:00.000-07:002007-04-17T21:28:00.000-07:00Good Luck Sweetie and I LOVE your new profile pic!...Good Luck Sweetie and I LOVE your new profile pic!!! SWEET!!!!turquoise crohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05873392444199186644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-25859365012205657212007-04-17T16:37:00.000-07:002007-04-17T16:37:00.000-07:00I got confused too, by those definitions, but I th...I got confused too, by those definitions, but I think you did a wonderful job with a subject that is usually very emotional. I hope the house sells quickly and you can find yourself in a home again with newspapers and coffee...<BR/>xoReginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-45075519786158112832007-04-17T16:34:00.000-07:002007-04-17T16:34:00.000-07:00Hummmmmmmm I have much to learn from you my friend...Hummmmmmmm I have much to learn from you my friend. Haibun ???<BR/>Oh the move...please make it swift and painless!!<BR/>Hugs<BR/>TJTJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00510301975315691761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-35274624743366019122007-04-17T12:47:00.000-07:002007-04-17T12:47:00.000-07:00It was really beautiful how the short lines mingle...It was really beautiful how the short lines mingled so well with the longer descriptions. I might just have to try one of those, too...If I can just figure out how. Thanks for the indications above.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16947043309319496271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-40814077225499381282007-04-17T12:20:00.000-07:002007-04-17T12:20:00.000-07:00I felt it, have lived it. Your heart goes with yo...I felt it, have lived it. Your heart goes with you, and you nailed that in the last words. I loved this.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-43031753643088410762007-04-17T12:06:00.000-07:002007-04-17T12:06:00.000-07:00I think you did just fine. Best of luck with the ...I think you did just fine. Best of luck with the sale, and I hope you are comfortably settled into your new home soon.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-81497453561910191752007-04-17T11:27:00.000-07:002007-04-17T11:27:00.000-07:00I like them-beautiful photo too sweetheart.XOI like them-<BR/>beautiful photo too sweetheart.<BR/>XOColorsonmymindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02424878757140605099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-12321253705494736412007-04-17T11:15:00.000-07:002007-04-17T11:15:00.000-07:00Such sadness in the poem. I can feel your walls, y...Such sadness in the poem. I can feel your walls, your detachment to the home, no longer home, just soon to be someone else's house.<BR/><BR/>(((((hugs))))Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-26361108609199807822007-04-17T10:55:00.000-07:002007-04-17T10:55:00.000-07:00This is beautifully written, prose and haiku. I ho...This is beautifully written, prose and haiku. I hope the move goes smoothly and I hope the cat finds her litter tray....Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-23711177329802987562007-04-17T10:39:00.000-07:002007-04-17T10:39:00.000-07:00I think you did a great job! I just love "heart i...I think you did a great job! I just love "heart in a box." I can see you're channeling your energy into some good avenues.Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04271616371758781735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-12712668672208984982007-04-17T09:51:00.000-07:002007-04-17T09:51:00.000-07:00Beautiful Poetry...great JOB!Beautiful Poetry...great JOB!wrduphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13091235458750543251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-15021380048174858852007-04-17T08:19:00.000-07:002007-04-17T08:19:00.000-07:00Beautifully done. I feel the sadness and loss, but...Beautifully done. I feel the sadness and loss, but a new home awaits your touch and love.<BR/><BR/>I love you, RobinPamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14040757371778588395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-76392610830645665992007-04-17T07:57:00.000-07:002007-04-17T07:57:00.000-07:00It's hard to turn one's home into a commodity to s...It's hard to turn one's home into a commodity to sell ... may it be a quick process for you. <BR/><BR/>Wonderful poetry, great job!! <I>Much peace, JP</I>JP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-61812383847155196772007-04-17T06:02:00.000-07:002007-04-17T06:02:00.000-07:00I'd say you MORE than nailed it, Tammy! Fantastic ...I'd say you MORE than nailed it, Tammy! Fantastic descriptions in both your poetry and prose...and wishing you ENERGY and comfort for the transition. xosusanlavonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06199263273657594890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-28186451590286441842007-04-17T05:30:00.000-07:002007-04-17T05:30:00.000-07:00Nailed it. Lovely job, Tammy. May the tranisiton g...Nailed it. Lovely job, Tammy. May the tranisiton go smoothly.Jonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19035377.post-62145883257289612442007-04-17T01:30:00.000-07:002007-04-17T01:30:00.000-07:00Wowza!Yep - your pen would definitely be mightier ...Wowza!<BR/>Yep - your pen would definitely be mightier than a samarai sword (if you haven't already - read my comments on your last post). XOXOTinkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11584047180190646921noreply@blogger.com