One Deep Breath - "Short & Sweet" One Line Poetry
My one line poetry was inspired by an unexpected snow fall. This photo is from this morning :(
Spring blossoms cut down in winter's last hurrah.
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Translucent pearls adorning morning petals.
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Fallen Daffodils will awaken the thaw.
23 comments:
Will those daffodils SPRING back???!! I HOPE we don't have anymore snow! xoCinda
you are so right, fallen daffodils will awaken the thaw. lovely haiku. hugs
Tammy I just love coming into your blog...so creative!! and that baby is getting so big! He has the cheeks to mush all over...laughing.
Glad Dave liked my entry.
Hugs to the two of yas!
Love TJ
Great song!!
I hope thos daffodils will awaken. Love the haikus, especially the second one. I posted about pantoums: http://deowriter.blogspot.com/2007/03/pantoum-poetry-form.html
One-line poetry that manages to fill a mind with remembrances. So beautifully done, as always, Tammy.
I love you~
Nikki
The first is my favorite and I'm sad for your that winter has reared its ugly head once again. Spring flowers don't last long enough the way it is.
You've made lemonade out of lemons :D
Lovely. They'll be back, as always.
Jimmy
PS sorry for the delay: use the fishies :)
Sending you my love sweet one.
XOXX
That is so sad about the daffodils. Makes me want to rescue them.
Your haiku are perfect. :)
Rose
xo
Beautiful words Tammy. Strong and vibrant.
(((hugs)))
poignant picture, beautiful even in its sadness - you captured that in your haiku.
Poor, brave daffodils! They so often get beaten down by spring snows.
Tammy,
Those translucent pearls are able to magnify the already beautiful flowers even in repose.
I like the way you see the glass 1/2 full. ;-)
rel
PS. meds worked! finally (7 days)
Succinctly perfect as always!
Tabor
Wonderful poem and photo (but poor daffodils). And congrats to YOU for your Thinking Blogger Award! If you hadn't already won, you would have been among my top choices for a thinking blogger! Bravo, Tammy! xo
The snow on the flowers made a good shot, Tammy. My favorite is the second one. Also, like the mosaic below. I have never able to produce anything nice with that tool.
how sad and yet you turned it to beauty ...
:)
hugs!
Ah, those poor daff's~ That always seems to happen to them though, they're just in such a hurry to bloom!
I hope your haiku is true, and they awaken the thaw!
I really liked the first and last. The daffodils are so bright they almost laugh at the snow in spite of being bent.
Have faith, my friend...
Love,
Nance
The first is my favorite! Winter is having its last hurrah here today. Nothing better than a cup of tea and staying undera a quilt.
I missed this from last week, Tammy! It's so beautiful and the poor daffodils...
I hope spring is here!
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