One Deep Breath- "Coffee Haiku"
Checking email
caffeine boots up my hard drive
ready to begin
Awake in a fog
following the aroma
hot liquid lingers
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See other "coffee & Tea" poetry here
A journey of discovery.
Checking email
caffeine boots up my hard drive
ready to begin
Awake in a fog
following the aroma
hot liquid lingers
Photos from stock.xchng
See other "coffee & Tea" poetry here
Created by Tammy Brierly at 8:25 AM
21 comments:
These are great! I love, "caffeine boots up my hard drive"- absolutely brilliant. And, "following the aroma" this is exactly what I do. Wonderful job.
Great... you just made me want a cup of coffee!! It is like a cozy sweater :)
"ready to begin" yes, yes, yes! it is a begining i love :)
I live that first one. I mean, I LOVE it. ;-) (Ok, I live it, too.)
Great job!
Jennifer
these really are great. isn't amazing how we all need our coffee and tea to be able to start the day on the right foot.(or just alive)
right i'm putting the kettle on right now!
xx
you are so creative. these are fantastic!
both great; liked the first one the best of the two :)
The first one is so funny. The problem for me is coffee boots up my hard drive a bit too much! The second haiku is lovely.
lovely haiku, tammy. i love the smell of coffee in the morning.
I love haiku! I once wrote a haiku series on my terrible prom experience. Yours in marvelous!
I'm not even much of a coffee drinker (I'm more of a tea-drinker), but I could almost smell the coffee reading your haikus! That first one is so clever, and the second one is lovely and cozy. Great job, Tammy!
The first one sounds a lot like me! I have noticed this week that everyone feels very strongly about their coffee or tea.
I finally finally finally answered your (and a few others) question on my blog today.
Oh...I like these. I shared them with my assistant, we're both on autopilot in the mornings until the coffee makes its way into our bloodstream.
I loved these! cool. And pictures of your house always look so nice...Just like a home I would love.
:)
Yep, that's me in the am - booting up along with the computer and my cuppa joe!
Loved those haiku...
LOL. I loved these haiku. I am so much the same in the a.m. Checking emails while the coffe brews.. beginning my day.
*Oh yes, you knew I had a perfect pic for the SPC. I only used it because my grand master plan for a great picture fell apart. I'll have a great one for next week.
Savoring my morning cup of coffee and finding your “Coffee Haiku” was a double shot. Thanks.
Patrick http://journals.aol.com/daddyleer/CaregivinglyYours/
"Boots up my hard drive".
Hi Tammy, I bet you pushed a lot of laughter buttons with people identifying with this image. I sure did. Hugs, Annie
You`re writing wonderfully!
Hugs,
V
I love the coffee Haiku
you are terrific
Kicking myself for missing so many of your posts
Love to you
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