One Single Impression - Listening Haiku
Tree branches thrashing
pitter pat across rooftop
squirrels having spring fling
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Tuesday, April 07, 2009
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"thrashing
pitter pat_ --having spring fling"-
the sound arrangement /rhyming scheme/ of ur words linked to the squirrels builds up a comic book excitement here_
but then to understand that_
one has to be a kid_
thanks tammy for building up the wonderment..
Such a cute little critter and springy little poem.
Love the auditory notes in this one - a sound I would love to hear on the roof almost as much as rain!
Tammy--
This made me smile, right out loud!
Thanks for the lovely words and the great picture!
You are loved!
Something they're very good at !
Love it Tammy! Those squirrels do know how to have fun, don't they?
What a beautiful picture..thanks for your spring cheer-
A haiku perfect for spring! Why is it squirrels look so cute in pics but in my back yard...They scare the bijibbies out of me! don't let mr. petals see this ones bushy tail or he may make it pink! (if u don't remember my post on squirrels Tam, you just think I am crazy right now!!)
haha
xo
what a cutie in the photo and good haiku!
Joy...
What a delightful haiku; they truly are crazy this time of the year and in the Fall. Or, maybe they are just that way....
Oh this one I just LOVE! Perfect spring haiku and photo. Well done Tammy.
Many hugs, G
Delightful Tammy!
Love this. Lots of times, I wouldn't have even noticed a squirrel if they weren't try to scare me off, especially the little red ones.
I love the pic and the poem!
You've said all that needs to be said to paint the picture -and a cute one it is too!
So lovely, Tammy! Happy Easter! xoxox
Perfect spring fling! Love it!
I go a little nuts when I see squirrels ;-) Hee hee - love this spring fling of yours! xOx
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